VIA DOLOROSA
CHAPTER ONE
All Night and Nothing to Show
Second Draft
PAGE ONE
(six panels)
One
Our main character, An alien Naval Officer, GENERAL DOLOROSA,
is running through the deck of an spaceship.
VOICE
Transporter malfunction! Transporter...
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VIA DOLOROSA
CHAPTER ONE
All Night and Nothing to Show
Second Draft
PAGE ONE
(six panels)
One
Our main character, An alien Naval Officer, GENERAL DOLOROSA,
is running through the deck of an spaceship.
VOICE
Transporter malfunction! Transporter
malfunction!
Two
Dolorosa runs up to a door.
Through the window is JOHANN
HENSLI, furiously banging on the window with terrified eyes.
JOHANN
Get this door open, Dolorosa!
Three
Dolorosa is looking inside, Behind Johann are five other
characters, standing in a cylinder room, looking at him with
the same terrified eyes.
JOHANN
Get this door open right now!
Four
Then suddenly, everyone in the room is gone.
Five
Six black balls is shot in a circle through a high-tech
spaceship, down at Earth.
Six
The six balls crashed down in a small town, exploding the
whole town to bits.
TEXT – Via Dolorosa
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