DIVIDED
PART FIVE
Third Draft
note:
Naming wife and husband, Kate and Mark.
Just cause.
PAGE ONE
(seven panels)
ONE
The Bentley is lying up-side down, wrecked.
The river is
pouring right through the car.
TWO
Inside the Bentley.
The family is trying to...
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DIVIDED
PART FIVE
Third Draft
note:
Naming wife and husband, Kate and Mark.
Just cause.
PAGE ONE
(seven panels)
ONE
The Bentley is lying up-side down, wrecked.
The river is
pouring right through the car.
TWO
Inside the Bentley.
The family is trying to pull of their
seat-belts, but they re stuck.
MARK
It s not coming off.
THREE
Kate is staring right at Kylie*, who s face and chest we
don t see.
KATE
What s wrong with her eyes? Why
does she have that face?
FOUR
Mark takes a quick look.
MARK
I-I.
.
.
I don t know.
Try to
find something to cut the seat-belts
with.
FIVE
Staying in the roughly the same position as in the previous
panel, but now the car is being lifted up.
The family looks
stunned.
MARK
What s happening?
SIX
Moving out, thousands of Freddys* are lifting up the car from
the river.
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