Caulkins 1
Reilee Caulkins
C.
Bazzarre
English I
9 March 2010
Using Pathos
My letter should get an "A" because it was written from the heart.
I wrote about the
things
I knew and had experienced, instead of the things I had yet to experience.
I explained...
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Caulkins 1
Reilee Caulkins
C.
Bazzarre
English I
9 March 2010
Using Pathos
My letter should get an "A" because it was written from the heart.
I wrote about the
things
I knew and had experienced, instead of the things I had yet to experience.
I explained
elements
about Redding that could only be seen through the eyes of someone that loved and felt one
with
nature.
I feel very strongly about Redding s beautiful scenery, and I think that came across
very
nicely in my letter.
I explained how Redding s landscapes made me feel, and how Shasta
County
contributed to that feeling.
I remember hiking up Whiskeytown Falls for the first time.
The beauty that was all
around me took my breath away.
I felt like a very small part of the universe for the very
first
time.
It made me realize how much redding meant to me.
And, I was able to see clearly
what I
would miss the most if I left it.
When I left that day, I couldn t help but feel that Redding was the best possible
place to
live.
I had
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