Filling holes

Filling holes So as I write, I leave holes behind. I can t think of an exciting way of doing something. Or I m not sure how to get where I want to go in the story because I m not totally sure where I am going. I skip over that part and come back later to... More

Filling holes So as I write, I leave holes behind. I can t think of an exciting way of doing something. Or I m not sure how to get where I want to go in the story because I m not totally sure where I am going. I skip over that part and come back later to it, once I know where I m going. Here s a bunch of little fills and slight changes to what I ve written. First insert: Why hasn’t she told anyone anything – important so that the conversations that follow aren’t redundant. This doesn’t hack it as well as I would like, but I think readers will excuse her not to fully debrief people on things she know. She and Pony had spent the last two days recuperating from their escape from the oni. She’d endured an endless parade of visitors -- her cousin, Oilcan, her human friends, and seemingly all the elves in Pittsburgh -- between bouts of drugged sleep, which gave the entire experience a surreal nightmare feel. Everyone had brought offerings and stories of Turtle Creek, until her bedro Less