The paragraph « structure » shows a repetition of « consistent » 3 times... (and clear) yes we know you like to be like that but don't repeat it too much... « Should now appears only 3 x : better indeed.
Shame for the small picture for the package in place.
Good and sensible work in general, she tried to get the best out of the lecture. A bit more logical madness would'nt have hurt. (like the added blue lines and page numbers mirrored instead of being copied and pasted. )
Final mark : 16.5