Visual Communication - Mauri Liebendörfer

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Mauri Visual Communication Liebendörfer ESC Lille 12April2009 Assignment IMiM M2 Prepared for: Luc Martin International Marketing - Marketing Communication 2 Major m a u r i @ a l i t e r . s e

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cgstudents
7 month(s) ago

Good analysis as Mauri is already conviced by the importance of the matter and invests himself in the commerce of visual things.
Your P5 : bottom of the page > did you miss « though » in « even though » no ? (about the story of a thousand words)
Your P5 : stylish way of ending (opposed to the autoblocked content of the cover...
Tempo mark : 15 / 20
I give 4 days to modify it if you wish. (take your temporary mark in account of course)

cgstudents
7 month(s) ago

General visual aspect very good. [BUT Late (13th of april)]
Good idea to attach the pdf file as well (and send a mail)
The typeface you chose is not always very legible. Avoid to use it all along and use it for the titles and choos e another one for the « text to read »... Black background : pretty smart (be aware that it is a difficult color to print and once printed it leaves mark easily. No Pb here as it is shown on a screen...
On your page 3 you use « most oftenly » which doesn't seem to exist in english.

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